It was an odd friday morning. Work had been cancelled, and my friend Alex had invited me to visit his church, the “Church of Aton”. I'd never been, and from what I heard, it was quite ridiculous. The leadership of this church claimed they had made contact with a supreme extraterrestrial power, and were in possession of a device which allowed one to come into contact with said power. Frankly, I'd always believed in aliens, but not of the kind that come down and start fanatical religious cults. Anyways, there was free food, and I was broke, so I agreed to go with him.
When we arrived at the parking lot, I became apprehensive. The building was tall, windowless, made of plain concrete, and only had one small, metal door on the front. A group of quiet, serious looking teenagers stood out front in an orderly line. A neatly dressed young man offered to park my car, but I declined. He insisted, so I drove away from him and parked it myself. We got out of the car, and I began walking towards the door.
“Where are you going?” Alex asked, “The shuttle picks us up here!” He pointed at the line.
“Shuttle? Aren't we here already?” I asked.
“Yes, but the entrance is on the other side.”
This sounded very impractical to me, but I wasn't about to say anything that might be construed as “judgmental”, regardless of what I actually thought about them.
About this time, the “shuttle”, a dingy old yellow school bus, came around the corner. It pulled up to a gate in a cyclone fence topped with barbed wire. I was starting to be afraid. This place looked a lot more like a prison than a church, especially as we stopped, the driver got out, and put a padlock on the gate. This was another parking area, with several nice looking cars scattered throughout it.
“What is this place?” I asked a casually dressed, middle aged man sitting next to me.
“I have no idea. This is my first time. I just flew in from San Fran, I'm pretty excited to be here. I'm told one can speak directly to Aton!”
“Really?” I said, my tone excited buy my expression sarcastic, “I'm just here for the free food.”
“Oh, you're one of them.” he said, stood up, and walked to the back of the bus. I was offended by his condescending attitude, but said nothing. As the bus turned around the corner to the back of the building, my ears perked up as I heard the long, loud noise of an old car being started.
“Dude! I think someone is trying to steal my car!” I said to Alex, as the bus slowly came to a stop. “I'm gonna go check on it.”
“I doubt it. There's too many people around!” He said. That was reasonable enough, so I pushed the worry aside.
We entered the building through a set of metal double doors, just like the one on the other side. The doors were held open by a couple of finely dressed and serious looking gentlemen. On their vests was a red circle with rays coming off of it.
“Good morning!” I said cordially. They did not respond.
“What is it with all these people?” I whispered to Alex, “Why are they all being so rude?”
“They're Acolytes. Kind of like a monk. They never speak to anyone outside of their order. And in general, speaking is frowned upon within the church.”
“I see..” I responded, starting to feel more than a little uncomfortable. “How long is this going to take?”
“It depends, really. There's a light snack, then you wait in line to enter the Communication Chamber, where you can speak with Aton. After that you may enter the Feast Chamber, where the Feast of Aton is served.”
I stifled a laugh. “The Feast of Aton?” I demanded, “It's really called that? It's like something out of a video game!”
“Shush.” Alex gave me a menacing glare. I shut up.
The entryway was a large, well lit, finely carpeted area with an enormous, grandiose depiction of the sun covering the walls and ceiling. There were rays extending from it, with hands on the end of each ray. The whole thing was plated with gold, and it appeared to be lit up from behind by some very bright lamps. These paintings were the only light in the room, and they lit it quite amply.
The grand entryway funneled into a relatively narrow hallway, which was completely bare and industrial looking. The floor was concrete, and the lights were mere fluorescent tubes. It was very odd, considering the very extravagant entryway.
“This hallway is in the process of being remodeled,” Alex whispered to me. One of the Acolytes glared at him disapprovingly, and he snapped back to silence before finishing his sentence.
At the entrance to the hallway, there was a stack of plastic plates. Alex picked two up, and handed one to me. As we inched forward in line, along the way there were little tables of hors' d'oeuvres- crackers, little balls of meat, and fine cheeses and bread. I filled my plate with crackers and cheese, and picked up a few little meat balls. The cheese was absolutely delicious, it must have been imported from France.
“Why don't you try some of this cheese!” I whispered to Alex, seeing that he had not picked any up. “It's amazing!”
“I can't. Those cheeses are reserved for our honored guests, such as yourself. The Children of Aton do not partake of such fineries.”
It seemed odd to me, but as I looked up and down the line, all the people with the sun ensign were indeed not eating the cheese. As we waited for what seemed like an eternity, my stomach began to complain. I didn't want to wait in line again, but I really needed to vomit.
“Hold my place in line. I've gotta use the can.” I whispered to Alex. I'd seen the doors back by the main entrance, so I headed back that way. Along the way, people stared at me, and I became increasingly uncomfortable.
“Sorry!” I mouthed, as I walked back.
I went into one of the stalls and closed the door. Almost immediately I released the contents of my stomach into the toilet. I wiped my face with some toilet paper and flushed it down. As I came out, one of the Acolytes stopped me.
“Did you just vomit up the holy Sacrament?” he demanded, with a very serious tone of voice.
I was struck by the realization that in order for him to speak to me, it clearly must be a very grave offense to do so.
“No, no. I just have a stomach bug, had to empty my bowels.”
He didn't look terribly convinced, but he didn't say another word and let me pass. When I returned to the line, most of the people had already gone through. I didn't recognize any of the people, and I saw no sign of my friend. I walked along the line until it went around a corner. This was now another fancifully decorated hallway, this one very short. At the end of the hallway, on the right side, was a large glass box on a pedestal, with a short black stairway going up to it. Inside the box was a large, bright, circular object. I assumed this must be Aton, or at least his representation. There was a man sitting inside the box, with his head rested on his hands, staring into the circle. A brightly illuminated fog filled the top of the chamber. I didn't really feel like staring at a bright light, so I walked past it. On the right, there was an open door with a staircase going up, and straight ahead, there was another open door with a few steps down into another hallway.
I took the stairs going up. There was a pair of large, very long tables with people seated around them, eating various vegetable and bread products. I saw my friend sitting along the closer one, and walked over to him. He didn't seem to notice my presence, so I elbowed him.
“How.. was it?” he said, slowly and laboriously, “How was it?”
“It was.. uh.. good!” I said, “Yeah it was pretty sweet!”
“What he tell you?” he said again. His words were noticeably forced and he seemed to be having trouble sitting still.
“Uh.. I'm supposed to keep it to myself.” I said. “What did he tell you?”
“Um.. its like.. woah.. just woah.. Seriously!”
At this point, I began to be suspicious. My friend wasn't behaving like someone who had just had a spiritual experience, he was behaving like he was on a drug trip. Much as drug trips and spiritual experiences have gone together for millennia, I would never expect it from a cult of science-minded folk worshipping some alien being – and suddenly everything made sense. The mandate for silence, the stomach ache I'd had after eating their seemingly innocent hors' d'oeuvres, the bright cloud of fog. It was no wonder that supposedly “every person who came experienced the Light of Aton”.
I tried to get my friend up, but he grasped my arm and demanded that I sit with him. I broke free of his grasp, and walked back down the stairs. I looked at the “Communication Chamber” again. Another person was getting into it, the asshole from San Fran I'd met on the bus. After he closed the door, the white haze settled in from above.
“Isn't it beautiful?”
The voice of one of the teenagers, a girl, surprised me. I had become accustomed to the silence already.
“Uh yeah, it certainly is.” I gave her a mocking smile.
The light smoke had already reached the floor. On a whim, I hit the glass enclosure with my fist. The man inside jumped, startled, and fell over on his side and started whimpering. My conclusion was correct, they were indeed piping hallucinogens into the chamber. Two of the Acolytes approached me and grabbed my arms. They dragged me into the adjacent hallway, which was perpendicular to the main entryway.
“What do you think you're doing?” one of them scolded, “The Communication Chamber is sacred, and it is a sacrilege to disturb the devout within!”
“I'm sorry!” I said, “My friend is in there, and we need to go! My mother has just been taken to the hospital!”
“We shall let Aton decide what to do with you!” the other's voice scowled.
“Let me go! You have no right to do anything with me!” I demanded.
“Aton is the only one who can determine right and wrong. You shall go before him!”
Seeing that they were not going to be dissuaded, and knowing that there was no way I could get out of there without them releasing me, I consented.
“Very well. I put my trust in Aton's judgement.” I responded.
“Silence! Your sacrilege has gone on long enough!”
They took me along the hallway and put me in a dark room. I feared for my life – I had no idea what these religious nutjobs were capable of. All I knew was that if I ever got out of there, I was going to see this place burned to the ground.
I was in the dark room for hours. I tried to use my cell phone, but inside the building I had no service whatsoever. Apparently concrete walls block cell phone signals. Every so often, I would bang on the door and yell for someone to come help me, but nobody ever came. Finally, after about four hours, the door opened, and four Acolytes entered.
“About fucking time!” I grumbled. One of the Acolytes hit me with a stick.
They dragged me to the “Communication Chamber”, and threw me in, closing the door behind me. From the inside, you could see nothing outside. The walls were one-way mirrors, and the only object inside the chamber was a neat little rug to sit on. I beat on the glass, but nobody came. Then the fog descended on me.
It was not of a heavenly odor at all. It had a pungent, repulsive smell to it, and I wondered how anyone could mistake this experience for an encounter with God, or Aton, or anything other than a drug-induced hallucination. I didn't have to wonder for long though.
I became increasingly aware of my pulse. It was like a wave that passed through my body, and everything was synchronized with it. Even as it seemed to get slower and slower, every pulse brought the next frame of video that was my vision. Suddenly everything became bright, and my whole body felt intensely hot. The shimmering orb in front of me pulsed out across the room in waves, like a rippling on the surface of a pond. The glass walls surrounding me extended into an infinite plane, and there existed on this plane only me and the shimmering orb of light that hovered in front of me. Suddenly, I was thrown prostrate against the floor.
“My son!” boomed a loud voice, echoing a million times over on each ripple of the brightness. I became afraid. How could I tell Aton himself that his cult was nothing but hallucinogenic drugs and bright lights?
“Father?” I said, “I meant no harm or offense in my actions. Forgive me.”
“Father Aton holds no offenses. But you must atone for your sacrilege.” boomed the voice again. The orb split in two as I considered why it spoke in third person.
“Yes Father. What must I do?” I responded, courteously, slightly awestruck, but still only cooperating because I wanted to escape.
“Your pride is your downfall. You must serve the basest of servants, the cleaner of floors, until I have seen that you have learned your place.”
“Yes Father. Your wisdom knows no bounds.”
The light blinked out in an instant, and I felt like I was riding each of the ripples it had created. Suddenly, I was drawn back to reality by two well dressed men pulling me upright.
“Shit!” I said to myself, “And I thought this was all a dream.”
The Acolytes stood me up on my feet. They wrapped a red bandana around my head, and began to drag me again. I stood up, and walked with them. They took me to a room, where a homely older man in a blue jumpsuit with the emblem on it awaited me.
“Aton has deemed it necessary that you have a servant. He is yours to command.” one of the Acolytes chimed. It bothered me how poetic and melodramatic their speech was.
Wordlessly, the janitor handed me a sponge and a bucket of soapy water. He walked to the door, and gestured for me to follow. I followed him, reluctantly. He led me to the restroom, and indicated that I should clean the stalls. I thought it was rather amusing, knowing that I'd vomited up their “sacrament” in this very same stall. I began scrubbing methodically. The janitor paid no attention to me whatsoever.
When the janitor was not looking at me, I checked my cell phone real quick. I was surprised they hadn't taken it away from me. There was no service here either, so I turned it off to save battery for if I ever got out of there.
It didn't take long to finish up the restroom, and soon we were on to the women's room. I'd considered making a run for the doors, but there really wasn't a way out from there. Even if I made it out the doors, the most I could do is call for help- the massive coils of barbed wire on the fence outside would tear me to shreds if I tried to climb over it. And I was sure that they would make me disappear before the cops showed up anyways.
I was on my hands and knees scrubbing the base of a toilet when a young girl, probably no more than 17, entered the bathroom. She walked by me, glanced at me with a empathetic look in her eyes, and entered the stall next to mine. Even as I scrubbed, I could hear the soft sounds of sobbing from the stall next to me. It felt comforting, and alarming, to know that I wasn't the only one that was trapped in this pseudo-nightmare. But mostly I felt sorry that someone of her age would have to live in such a place. I was starting to become more and more incensed at this whole establishment.
After I finished cleaning the bathrooms, I was returned to my cell. It had been over six hours now that I'd been there, and I had come to the realization that they were never going to let me leave. My thoughts turned to escape- surely it couldn't be that hard, the building wasn't that big, and as far as I could tell, I must have been on the first floor still. This meant that there was a door to the parking lot out front, somewhere. If I could get there, all I had to do was get into my car and drive away- once I was gone, there was nothing they could do. I thought of the other kids that must be trapped here, but the reality that they must have been brainwashed into staying here hit me. There was nothing I could do, they were just as bad as the Acolytes for my escaping.
A few hours later, the janitor opened the door and released me from my cell again. This time he gave me a mop and directed me to clean the hallway. I snapped to it. This would be an excuse to scout out the building. The end of the hallway where my cell was was of no consequence- nothing here but another cell door or two, and the hall back to the entrance. I quickly mopped that area, and began moving down the hall. The janitor went off and away, and I was all alone. I skipped down the hallway a bit.
I came to another fork in the hallway. This place was starting to feel like a maze, and I was having a hard time keeping the layout straight. Here, however, there were other people going about their business. There were a couple of Acolytes standing watch next to an elevator door, and a girl unpacking some boxes onto a counter across the hall from the Acolytes. I recognized the girl, she was the same one that I'd heard crying in the bathroom, but here she wore a smile and went about her business. As I mopped, I watched her out of the corner of my eye. Everything she did, she did quickly but not carefully, and her hands were shaking almost uncontrollably. She stumbled ever so slightly now and then.
She was unpacking what must have been wedges of cheese. They were wrapped in blue foil, and she would pick up five or six of the wedges at once and set them on the counter. All of a sudden, she dropped a load on the ground. One of the wedges hit the ground with the sharp end down, and the foil ripped on the ground. She got down on her hands and knees, and, even with me watching, picked up the broken edge and started nibbling on it. I set my mop against the wall, and went over, as if to help her pick them up.
“You best give me some, or I'll tell the Acolytes that you've been munching on the cheese!”, I whispered to her.
She handed me a bit of cheese, and whispered back,
“Please don't! I don't want to go to the Chamber of Horror again!”
“Why do you stay here? Surely you must know a way out?”
We were running out of time. This distraction couldn't go on forever, the Acolytes would surely suspect something after a moment or two.
“I miss my family so much! The door is just over there,” she pointed down the hall, “but there's no way I could get that far without being stopped. Plus Aton would be so angry if I did!”
“I think I can cause a diversion. We can get out of here!” I insisted.
“But the--” she began, but I stood back up and returned to my bucket. I dipped the mop back in, thoroughly soaked it in soapy water, and then, with one jerk of my arms, flicked as much water as possible into the faces of the Acolytes. They winced in pain, and I started running. I grabbed the arm of the girl, and ran down the hall towards the door. Another teenager ran at me and grabbed my arm,slowing me down as the Acolytes regained their senses, but I kicked her in the shin and threw her forcefully off of me onto a table. We ran out the door and into the parking lot.
It was dark now, and I couldn't see my car anywhere in the mostly-empty parking lot.
“My car is over there!” she said, pointing at a recent model Toyota, “Let's take it.”
She pulled out a keychain, and clicked the remote. The lights flashed as its doors unlocked.
I looked around for my car, and spotted it on the other side of the chain link fence. Thinking that this whole escape was too easy, I replied to her:
“No way! I think its a trap! Lets take my car!”
I ran over to the gate, climbed up the front of it, and vaulted over the top, inflicting deep cuts on the barbed wire. I pulled the gates as far apart as the chain would let them go, and let her through.
“But the gates are locked! How will we get out?”
I thought about this a moment. “I have a hacksaw in my car. Maybe I can cut the lock before they get back around over here.
At this moment, an Acolyte came out into the parking lot. I grabbed the girl and ducked down next to my car. The other Acolyte came out and joined the first, and I saw one of them excitedly gesture to search the lot.
As they looked around and under the cars, I quietly opened the door of my car and grabbed the hacksaw out of the back. I crept over to the gate and began sawing on one of the links. I was about halfway through it when one of the Acolytes spotted me.
“There he is! I'll hold him here, go around and get him!” he shouted. The other one ran inside quickly. The first pulled a taser from his belt and ran over to the fence.
“We're gonna have to just go for it!” I quickly told the girl. I started my car, backed up to the back of the enclosure, and put my car in first gear. I stomped on the gas pedal, and drove straight for the gate. The Acolyte jumped out of the way just in time for me to smash through, snapping the chain, and roaring into the night.
A few minutes later, we were back at my house in town, and I pulled into the garage. Looking out the window, I saw nobody, and was relieved to know that I hadn't been followed.
“You're safe now!” I said, “We're away from that horrible place.”
“You should have stayed where you belong!” I turned around just in time to see the girl swinging a wrench at my head. I dodged her swing, and tackled her to the ground.